Showing posts with label poetry friday. Show all posts
Showing posts with label poetry friday. Show all posts

Friday, October 24, 2008

Poetry Friday: Goblin Market by Christina Rosetti

As Halloween approaches, I cannot help but think of Christina Rosetti's Goblin Market, a poem I studied first in high school and then more in-depth in college. This is the story of two sisters, Laura and Lizzie, who:


"MORNING and evening
Maids heard the goblins cry:
"Come buy our orchard fruits,
Come buy, come buy:
Apples and quinces,
Lemons and oranges,
Plump unpeck'd cherries,
Melons and raspberries,
Bloom-down-cheek'd peaches,
Swart-headed mulberries,
Wild free-born cranberries,
Crab-apples, dewberries,
Pine-apples, blackberries,
Apricots, strawberries; -"

One day Laura yields to the temptation and consumes the fruit and almost dies as a result before her sister heroically saves her in a most bizarre way.

With themes of temptation, redemption, the fallen woman, sexuality, and more, it was captivating enough to get me interested in poetry as a high school student. And creepy enough for my teenage angst to keep me reading it over and over again.

If you haven't read the very long poem, you can find it here. Or listen to a fairly creepy audio recording here.


Kelly is hosting Poetry Friday at Big A little a.


Friday, September 19, 2008

Crocs! by David T. Greenberg , illustrated by Lynn Munsinger



For today's Poetry Friday selection, I'm offering up Crocs!, a rhyming picture book by "the emerging poet of gross," David T. Greenberg. Told in second person, which is unique in itself, a boy leaves the city for what promises to be a quiet vacation away from "Roaches in your omelets/ pigeons dropping bomblets/ wild poodles stalking you in gangs." At first he's having a nice time relaxing, but is soon surrounded by tons of crocodiles intent on disturbing his peaceful vacation. They soon invade his life, and the boy soon starts getting the urge to act like a crocodile. The surprise ending is cute and satisfying even though it is a bit cheesy.

So, you know, it's very difficult to tell a story in rhyme. Children's book authors often try it and often fail because it's hard to make the rhymes work. While Crocs! is not a failure, there are moments when the rhymes really work like in the beginning of the book, "Isn't it a pity/ That you had to leave the city/ Because of the all the horrifying critters/ Giant tabby cats/ And defiant scabby rats/ Large enough to swallow baby-sitters."

And then there are times when the rhythm is off a bit: "Crocodiles growling/ Crocodiles Howling/ At the very tops of their lungs/ Crocodiles thrashing/ Wildly smashing/ Crocs with studs in their tongues."

However, Lynn Munsinger's illustrations are very funny and had me laughing out loud in places. Goofy-looking crocodiles are in all types of funny situations. You see a long-lashed crocodile putting on lipstick, another painting her nails bright pink, a couple of crocodiles unsuccessfully trying to floss their teeth, a crocodile chef with a wok, noodles in its mouth and all over the place, and many many more. Because of this, I can forgive some of the weak poetry in the book even though I really do wish it was just a tad bit better.

I think many kids will enjoy the absurdity of the situations depicted in the book and will reach for it again and again.

Visit the Poetry Friday roundup at author amok.



What Other Bloggers are Saying:

Charlotte's Library:
"...this book is fun to read aloud, and fun to look at, and kind of strange. Definitely one for the child who appreciates more than a bit of surreality with their playful, rollicking verse." (read more...)

A Patchwork of Books: "The illustrations are a perfect match to the story and your little ones will be giggling at the silliness of the crocs and the great faces on the boy." (read more...)


More info:
  • Reading level: Ages 4-8
  • Hardcover: 32 pages
  • Publisher: Little, Brown Young Readers (May 1, 2008)
  • Language: English
  • ISBN-10: 0316073067
  • ISBN-13: 978-0316073066
  • Source: Review copy from publisher



Friday, August 1, 2008

Poetry Friday Roundup

Welcome! Happy August and Happy Poetry Friday!


I discovered Sylvia Plath during my senior year in high school when I read The Bell Jar. Soon after, I picked up a collection of Plath's poetry and was quickly drawn in. As a teenager, I remember feeling very affected by the raw emotion that seeped through her poetry, and I was compelled to learn as much about Plath and her poetry as I could.

Years later, I still love her poetry and am always deeply affected by the power and emotion of her words. Lady Lazarus, written not long before her suicide, is perhaps one of my favorites and one that never fails to take my breath away, especially the last stanza:

"Out of the ash/ I rise with my red hair/And I eat men like air."
A little disturbing, no?



Lady Lazarus, by Sylvia Plath

"I have done it again.
One year in every ten
I manage it----

A sort of walking miracle, my skin
Bright as a Nazi lampshade,
My right foot

A paperweight,
My face a featureless, fine
Jew linen.

Peel off the napkin
0 my enemy.
Do I terrify?----

The nose, the eye pits, the full set of teeth?
The sour breath
Will vanish in a day.

Soon, soon the flesh
The grave cave ate will be
At home on me

And I a smiling woman.
I am only thirty.
And like the cat I have nine times to die.

This is Number Three.
What a trash
To annihilate each decade."


(read the rest here...)




I'm looking forward to seeing what everyone has to offer up today. Mr. Linky is giving me heartburn, so I'm going old-school. Leave your link in the comments, and I'll post the round-up throughout the day. I'll be heading out to a party (woot woot!) around 5:00 EST, so if I don't get to you by then, I'll finish Saturday morning. Have a fantastic weekend!


THE ROUNDUP!
Stacey at Two Writing Teachers is in with "Miracle Workers" by Taylor Mali.

Michele at Scholar's Blog shares Auden's "Musée Des Beaux Arts."

Tadmack at Finding Wonderland offers up some modern Scottish poetry with Tim Turnbull's "Getting in Touch With Our Feminine Sides."

Kelly at Big A little a is in with a poem about Iowa with "In the Elementary School Choir" by Gregory Djanikian.

Cloudscome at A Wrung Sponge is asking (BEGGING) for suggestions as to where she can submit her poetry. Head on over if you have any. Good luck Cloudscome!

Janet at Findings offers Jane Kenyon's "Afternoon in the House."

Laura Salas shares some great "15 Words or Less" poems and invites us to share our own.

Mary Lee at A Year of Reading is in with a poem from A Writers Almanac, Anne Stevenson's "Living in America."

Andrea at Just One More Book offers up a podcast chat about Barbara Nichol's collection of dog-themed poems "Biscuits in the Cupboard."

Jama Rattigan celebrates the lovely and delicious tomato with Pablo Neruda's "Ode to Tomatoes," mouthwatering pictures, tomato art, a song, and more. Mmmmm.....

Elaine Magliaro is in with an original poem at Wild Rose Readers, "Deep Fried Dream." Elaine also shares more food poems, including Anne Stevenson's "In the Tunnel of Summers," at Blue Rose Girls. My mouth is watering.

Lisa Chellman at Under the Covers shares a lovely original poem, "Pink Summer."

I see a theme today with summer, food, and dogs. Linda at Write Time gives a review of Once I Ate a Pie, a collection of dog poems.

Liza at It's Just About Me: My Life and All That shares an original poem that really struck home with me and shares an important lesson for parents.

mnosal at Mnosals Weblog shares Deborah Chandra's "Porch Light." It brought back a lot of memories of my childhood days of sitting on my mother's porch at night.

Becky at Becky's Book Reviews is in with two animal poems from ANIMAL EXERCISES: POEMS TO KEEP FIT by Mandy Ross.

Muriel at The Write Sisters writes about New Hampshire's National Poet Laureates and highlights Ox-Cart Man by Donald Hall.

Jennie at Biblio File is in with an original, "A Phone Call With My Father."

Akelda the Gleeful at Saints and Spinners shares poetry written by K. Jay based on "Jack B. Nimble."

Nancy at Naturally Speaking, brings us an original, "Daisy Patch: NYS Thruway 2008."

MsMac at Check it Out celebrates honeybees with a poem by Naomi Shihab Nye.

Over at Bildungsroman, Little Willow quotes a song from Gail Carson Levine's novel, Fairest.

Suzanne at Adventures in Daily Living shares Elizabeth Coatsworth's "All Goats."

AmoXcalli is in with a book review of a new Rumi translation.

Fuse #8 offers up a review of Minn and Jake's Almost Terrible Summer.

Lisa at A Little of This, a Little of That shares an original senryu poem.

Charlotte at Charlotte's Library is in with "Sheltered Garden" by H.D.

Ruth at There is no Such Thing as a God-Forsaken Town offers up Carl Sandburg's "Grass."

Cuileann at The Holly and the Ivy shares Franz Wright's "Event Horizon."

Miss Erin is in with Shel Silverstein's "Loser."

Felicity at Look Books brings us an untitled poem by Mercy Otis Warren.

Over at Paper Tigers, Marjorie reviews an introduction-to-poetry anthology: The Ring of Words, edited by Roger mcGough and illustrated by Satoshi Kitamura.

Mme T at Destined to Become a Classic shares a very sad poem, "The Breather," by Billy Collins.

ebin_5446 at Amy, Aaron, and the mini-Wheats shares some haiku-style reviews as well as some original haiku.

Finally, Tricia at The Miss Rumphius Effect ends a fantastic Poetry Friday with Emily Dickinson.

Thanks to everyone who contributed!

Friday, June 27, 2008

Poetry Friday: Alexander Pope and The Great Chain of Being

The current issue of Lapham's Quarterly examines the theme of Nature, and includes this excerpt from Pope's Essay on Man:

VIII. See, through this air, this ocean, and this earth,
All matter quick, and bursting into birth.
Above, how high, progressive life may go!
Around, how wide! how deep extend below?
Vast chain of being! which from God began,
Natures ethereal, human, angel, man,
Beast, bird, fish, insect, what no eye can see,
No glass can reach; from Infinite to thee,
From thee to nothing. On superior powers
Were we to press, inferior might on ours:
Or in the full creation leave a void,
Where, one step broken, the great scale’s destroyed:
From Nature’s chain whatever link you strike,
Tenth or ten thousandth, breaks the chain alike.
And, if each system in gradation roll
Alike essential to the amazing whole,
The least confusion but in one, not all
That system only, but the whole must fall.
Let earth unbalanced from her orbit fly,
Planets and suns run lawless through the sky;
Let ruling angels from their spheres be hurled,
Being on being wrecked, and world on world;
Heaven’s whole foundations to their centre nod,
And nature tremble to the throne of God.
All this dread order break—for whom? for thee?
Vile worm!—Oh, madness! pride! impiety!

Pope's theme here is the Great Chain of Being:





Its major premise was that every existing thing in the
universe had its "place" in a divinely planned hierarchical order, which was
pictured as a chain vertically extended. ("Hierarchical" refers to an order
based on a series of higher and lower, strictly ranked gradations.) An object's
"place" depended on the relative proportion of "spirit" and "matter" it
contained--the less "spirit" and the more "matter," the lower down it
stood.



....



A major example [of this theme] was the title character of Christopher
Marlowe's play Doctor Faustus. Simultaneously displaying the grand spirit of
human aspiration and the more questionable hunger for superhuman powers, Faustus seems in the play to be both exalted and punished. Marlowe's drama, in fact, has often been seen as the embodiment of Renaissance ambiguity in this regard,
suggesting both its fear of and its fascination with pushing beyond human
limitations.



I thought it might be interesting to write a post-enlightenment Great Chain of Being poem with a modern twist on all the familiar themes. In fact, it might begin with an embrace of the scientific hubris about which Renaissance artists were ambivalent. Here's a beginning -- I'll be working on this over the next few weeks:



Nothing is invisible --
We have our ways of casing the world:
Tripods squat upon their earth,
Antennae grow in thickets,
Satellites collect signs of universal dust
From glowing distant cartwheel hubs
Packed with spaces only light can cross
To inflame the axons of its curious generations
The roundup is at Biblio File!















Friday, April 25, 2008

Poetry Friday: Love Calls Us to the Things of This World

Richard Wilbur published his first poem when he was 8 years old. He went on to translate Moliere and Racine, write lyrics musicals, win the Pulitzer Prize, and become the U.S. Poet Laureate. If you've never been inspired by laundry, now's your chance.

Love Calls Us to the Things of This World


by Richard Wilbur

The eyes open to a cry of pulleys,

And spirited from sleep, the astounded soul

Hangs for a moment bodiless and simple

As false dawn.

Outside the open window

The morning air is all awash with angels.

Some are in bed-sheets, some are in blouses,

Some are in smocks: but truly there they are.

Now they are rising together in calm swells

Of halcyon feeling, filling whatever they wear

With the deep joy of their impersonal breathing;

Now they are flying in place, conveying

The terrible speed of their omnipresence, moving

And staying like white water; and now of a sudden

They swoon down into so rapt a quiet

That nobody seems to be there.

The soul shrinks

From all that it is about to remember,

From the punctual rape of every blessèd day,

And cries,

“Oh, let there be nothing on earth but laundry,

Nothing but rosy hands in the rising steam

And clear dances done in the sight of heaven.”

Yet, as the sun acknowledges

With a warm look the world’s hunks and colors,

The soul descends once more in bitter love

To accept the waking body, saying now

In a changed voice as the man yawns and rises,

“Bring them down from their ruddy gallows;

Let there be clean linen for the backs of thieves;

Let lovers go fresh and sweet to be undone,

And the heaviest nuns walk in a pure floating

Of dark habits,

keeping their difficult balance.”


The Poetry Friday roundup is at The Miss Rumphius Effect

Friday, April 18, 2008

Poetry Friday: Philip Larkin's "Aubade" - "I work all day, and get half drunk at night"


Thanks for visiting! We're happy to be hosting Poetry Friday today at The Well-Read Child! Leave your link in the comments, and we'll post the roundup throughout the day!



In the Middle Ages minstrels sometimes sang Aubades, or songs about lovers parting at dawn. This theme was revived by metaphysical poets like John Donne. In "The Sun Rising," he rails against the sun for its interruption of lovers.

In "Aubade," Philip Larkin replaces one lover with death, and speaks of night not as romantic cover but as an encounter with "what is really always there," mortality. The parting lover becomes the parting of this consciousness of mortality in exchange for the glare of distractions from it -- socializing, work, religion, drink. "I work all day, and get half drunk at night."

Aubade by Philip Larkin
I work all day, and get half-drunk at night.
Waking at four to soundless dark, I stare.
In time the curtain-edges will grow light.
Till then I see what's really always there:
Unresting death, a whole day nearer now,
Making all thought impossible but how
And where and when I shall myself die.
Arid interrogation: yet the dread
Of dying, and being dead,
Flashes afresh to hold and horrify.

Read the rest here.

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Now, for the roundup!

Stacey and Ruth over at Two Writing Teachers have been hosting a One Week Poetry Challenge all week. If you haven't checked out all of the wonderful poems, now's your chance. Be sure to also check out Stacey's original poem about joy.

Tiel Aisha Ansari at Knocking From Inside brings us an original piece, "Edgar on Time", with an epigraph from Shakespeare.

Tricia at The Miss Rumphis Effect shares Paul Laurence Dunbar's "The Debt".

Elaine gives us two treats this week. First, at Wild Rose Reader, find an interview with Joyce Sidman. Next, at Blue Rose Girls, read Archibald MacLeish's "Ars Poetica."

John at The Book Mine Set shares a review of Selected Poems of Federico Garcia Lorca, translated by Martin Sorrell as well as a "Do-it-yourself" Lorca invitation. See what John came up with, and give it a try yourself.

Jenny at Jenny's Wonderland of Books joins us for her first Poetry Friday and brings us two poems by Vachel Lindsay. Welcome Jenny!

Devin at Speak of the Splendor shares May Swenson's "Analysis of Baseball."

Gregory K. at GottaBook is in with an original poem, "There's a Closet in My Nightmare."

Marie at Literacy Details shares a poem by Kristine O'Connell George.

Jama at Jama Rattigan's Alphabet Soup is in with poems about being late by Jeffrey McDaniel and Ted Hughes.

Cloudscome at A Wrung Sponge brings us an original, "First The Flower, Then the Leaf", her response to Tricia's Monday Poetry Stretch.

Sarah at In Need of Chocolate shares W.B. Yeats' "The Cat and the Moon."

Andrea and Mark at Just One More Book! share their podcast review of the rhyming picture book, Best Friend on Wheels.

writer2B is in with W.S. Merwin's "The Unwritten."

Ruth at There is No Such Thing as a God-forsaken Town, bids farewell to Aimé Césaire, who died yesterday.

Carol from Carol's Corner joins us for the first time bringing "Confessions of a Reader." Welcome Carol!

Lisa at A Little of This, A Little of That brings "The Pow Wow at the End of the World," by Sherman Alexie.

Sarah at Just Another Day of Catholic Pondering celebrates spring with Lawrence Raab's "Cold Spring."

Mme T at Destined to Become a Classic offers Don Paterson's "Poetry."

Sara at Read Write Believe shares the poem she carried in her pocket yesterday: Elizabeth Bishop's "The Filling Station."

Mary Lee at A Year of Reading shares some acrostics written by her students.

Seven Impossible Things Before Breakfast
shares an interview with The Poetry Seven, the seven bloggers who created last week's crown sonnet, "Cutting a Swath."

Anastasia at Picture Book of the Day is in with the picture book, Jazz Baby.

Jenny at Little Acorns Treehouse brings us "Jerimoth Hill" by Tom Chandler, a poem that describes the landscape of Rhode Island.

Becky Levine offers up an original poem this week.

Karen Edmisten shares Frances Thompson's "The Hound of Heaven."

In celebration of GLBTQ poetry, Lee Wind from I'm Here. I'm Queer. What the Hell do I Read? shares Dennis Cooper's "James Kelly."

At Bildungsroman, Little Willow offers Hart Crane's "Chaplinesque. "

At World of Words, Marcie shares some Mother Goose rhymes.

Becky at Becky's Book Reviews shares "Rated PG-13", a fairy-tale related poem from Vivian Vande Velde's Tales From the Brothers Grimm and the Sisters Weird.

Becky at Farm School offers an Adrian Henri fractured fairy tale poem, and a bit of Charles Causley's thoughts on poetry for children.

Miss Erin brings us "Winter's on the Wing," from Secret Garden, the Musical.


MsMac at Check It Out shares a winning poem from one of her students and some great haiku from third graders.

Susan T. at Chicken Spaghetti gives us Josephine Jacobson's "Monosyllable."

Lisa Chellman at Under the Covers muses about Oscar Wilde, the value of beautiful wallpaper, and why she writes. She also gives us snippets of some of Wilde's and John Keats' poetry.

Marjorie at Paper Tigers talks about
about children's poets Michael Rosen and Jorge Luján's share of a talk at the Bologna Book Fair. Be sure to check out the animation at the end!

Suzanne at Adventures in Daily Living brings "The Windhover" by Gerard Manley Hopkins.

a. fortis at Finding Wonderland brings us two gems from T.S. Eliot.

Liz at Liz in Ink shares some "poetry-centric ramblings" and a E.E. Cummings' "My Love is Building a Building."

Gina at AmoXcalli implores us to Save the Tacos. Also check out Gina's poetry news and student animation over at Cuentecitos.

Anamaria from Books Together brings us "Los Zapaticos de Rosa" from Cuban poet, Jose Marti.

MsMac offers up an original poem regarding her absence at a book challenge hearing for MT Anderson's Feed.

Fuse #8 is in with a post about the poetry collection, Inside Out: Children's Poets Discuss Their Work.

Liz B. at A Chair, A Fireplace, & A Tea Cozy gives us "The Red Wheelbarrow" by William Carlos Williams.

Felicity at Look Books gives us Mary Oliver's "Summer Day."

The Reading Zone offers up an original poem as part of Two Writing Teachers' One Week Poetry Challenge.

Kelly at Big A little a gives a review of Jan Greenberg's Side by Side: New Poems Inspired by Art from Around the World.

Kelly Fineman
at Writing and Ruminating shares "The Lion and Albert" by Marriott Edgar.

Finally, Christine at The Simple and the Ordinary offers up "Flowers" by Robert Louis Stevenson.


Thank you everyone for your wonderful posts! It's been a pleasure hosting.

Friday, April 4, 2008

Poetry Friday: Crossing the Hellespont

Crossing the Hellespont
by Wes

When sadness comes, as Nixon said,
When sadness is upon me
I apologize for things I shouldn't
And my eyes drop all over the world

In shuddering waves the lids fan out
Into keyholes, into books
Along the depressed river banks, along the shores
And over nations, sporting fields, and goals

Apply themselves to the pyramids of Giza
At the Louvre impress themselves upon the Mona Lisa
Buoy the triremes on the seas and ride
Sharks and the tide

And even the toss of the waves themselves
Until time runs past them, and Napleon eats his words
Again.

When the sadness visits me,
As when Caesar cried over Alexander,
And Alexander felt his fever,
And Ghengis Khan stopped

Riding the horses and women of his enemies
As Nixon said so well:

"Members of the cabinet, members of the staff
we are a spontaneous goodbye
the best house has crumbled on those who serve
I haven't had time to be told how to run the world

"So when TR said of his young wife,
'When my heart's dearest died,
the light went out forever,'
his greatness had begun"

So as Nixon wept with planets
In their elliptical graves
Tears were, as space gasps,
Something that comes to be

But also they have always been with me
(Preserved and glassy-eyed in zero degrees)

Xerxes almost knew this when he lashed the sea
That Alexander crossed on a better day
And Hitler, with a pistol at his temple, prayed
For the first time clearly remembering
With the wetness of his eyes, an infernal pact
A complicity with the frayed and fleeing, terrified
Edges of the universe

As when Mussolini became a pendulum
And Stalin's fears gave birth to a final sin

As when the sadness comes to me
And like Ghengis Khan I want to feel my tears
(Galloping through space and the fantasy of nothingness)
Pass over the cheeks of the mourning and lovers and children

Rain on and up the roots of everything
To cross from blade to ray and quench the sun.


Visit the rest of the Poetry Friday roundup at Becky's Book Reviews.

Thursday, March 27, 2008

Poetry Friday: The Villanelle

Here's an interesting exercise: write a 19 line poem with just two rhyming sounds, and in which about a third of the lines are refrains. The first stanza haunts every other -- its first and third lines alternating as conclusions to the stanzas that follow, until they come together to end the poem as a couplet. Do that and you will have created something called a "villanelle."

Below I've included a) a great villanelle by Theodore Roethke and b) my own attempt at the form. If you're inspired to try your own hand at this, please feel free to post the result as a comment to this post. (It's a very fun excercise; learn more about the villanelle and how to write one here; for another famous example, see Dylan Thomas' Do not go gentle into that good night).

The Waking
by Theodore Roethke

I wake to sleep, and take my waking slow.
I feel my fate in what I cannot fear.
I learn by going where I have to go.

We think by feeling. What is there to know?
I hear my being dance from ear to ear.
I wake to sleep, and take my waking slow.

Of those so close beside me, which are you?
God bless the Ground! I shall walk softly there,
And learn by going where I have to go.

Light takes the Tree; but who can tell us how?
The lowly worm climbs up a winding stair;
I wake to sleep, and take my waking slow.

Great Nature has another thing to do
To you and me; so take the lively air,
And, lovely, learn by going where to go.

This shaking keeps me steady. I should know.
What falls away is always. And is near.
I wake to sleep, and take my waking slow.
I learn by going where I have to go.

Villanelle Expirans
by Wes

There is one small thing I would have you do
Don't let me down when I look up and say:
"Know I would only ask it of a few"

Never did I deny your silent moods
The time it took all evening to hear:
"There is one small thing I would have you do"

So leave me lying here when I am due
Don't lift me up when I lay down at last
Know I would only ask it of a few

Leaning is taking, the world gives me its hue
My debt called up sings this familiar tune:
"There is one small thing I would have you do."

I held the world dear even in its ruin
Tell morning this with hands wedged into time
Know I would only ask it of a few

The night's last hour on the budding dew
Leans down and waits to feel my arching soul
There is one small thing I would have you do
Know I would only ask it of a few.



Visit the rest of the Poetry Friday roundup at Cuentecitos today!

Friday, March 7, 2008

Poetry Friday: Robert Lowell's "The Quaker Graveyard in Nantucket"

Whenever I find myself growing grim about the mouth, I wear a tourist's shirt with "Nantucket" printed on the front. A nurse who had already done several embarrassing things to me saw the shirt and asked me if I had been there, and I told her I hadn't, there once was a girl had given it to me. I like the shirt because "Nantucket" seems simply exclamatory, and universal enough that you don't have to have been there. That's not just because of many honorary limericks, but because the island once ruled the sea, and deprived it of the world's largest animals. As Melville put it, "Two thirds of this terraqueous globe are the Nantucketer's. For the sea is his; he owns it, as Emperors own empires."

Owning the sea means dying in it, especially when you're hunting whales. Nantucket ruled the sea, and the sea was its graveyard, and the graveyard was a function of doing violence to the sacred--to the Leviathan, to the water: "The death-lance churns into the sanctuary...." Robert Lowell's "The Quaker Graveyard in Nantucket" mourns this violence, in the form of an elegy for his cousin Warren Winslow, who died at sea in World War II. Lowell himself was a pacifist who went to prison rather than fight. So the poem is not just an elegy but a rebuke to violence, broadly conceived as war against both nature and fellow human beings.

The whale and the sea are points of confluence for this theme, the whale because it is a large animal with religious significance, and the sea because it is both a sacred source of life and yet ready to do violence to it. In a way the whale is the preeminent pacifist, slow, lumbering, peaceful, and lodged in the violent ocean; magnificent but vulnerable to "the kill." Like Mary in the sixth stanza, there is something meditative in it, an evocation of the religious turning away from the ways of the world that makes itself vulnerable to them.

That vulnerability leads to a contamination of the sea, as Abel's blood is of the earth: "When the whale's viscera go and the roll/ Of its corruption overruns this world"; similarly for the victims of war: "Atlantic, you are fouled with the blue sailors,/ Sea-monsters, upward angel, downward fish." This reference to Paradise Lost joins man and sea, as does the juxtaposition in the first stanza of the recoil of honorary steel guns and earth-shaking Poseidon. There are costs to treating both human beings and nature as objects of violence, for the sake of commercial exploitation: "All you recovered from Poseidon died/ With you, my cousin, and the harrowed brine."

This is a difficult poem and I wish I had more time for analysis. Look for the references to Paradise Lost, Moby Dick, Thoreau, and the Bible. Here is a relevant passage from Moby Dick, one that appropriately joins peace and restlessness:

"And meet it is, that over these sea-pastures, wide-rolling watery prairies and Potter's Fields of all four continents, the waves should rise and fall, and ebb and flow unceasingly; for here, millions of mixed shades and shadows, drowned dreams, somnambulisms, reveries; all that we call lives and souls, lie dreaming, dreaming, still; tossing like slumberers in their beds; the ever-rolling waves but made so by their restlessness."

The Quaker Graveyard in Nantucket
Robert Lowell

[FOR WARREN WINSLOW, DEAD AT SEA]
Let man have dominion over the fishes of the sea and the fowls of the air and the beasts of the whole earth, and every creeping creature that moveth upon the earth.
I

A brackish reach of shoal off Madaket—
The sea was still breaking violently and night
Had steamed into our North Atlantic Fleet,
When the drowned sailor clutched the drag-net. Light
Flashed from his matted head and marble feet,
He grappled at the net
With the coiled, hurdling muscles of his thighs:
The corpse was bloodless, a botch of reds and whites,
Its open, staring eyes
Were lustreless dead-lights
Or cabin-windows on a stranded hulk
Heavy with sand. We weight the body, close
Its eyes and heave it seaward whence it came,
Where the heel-headed dogfish barks its nose
On Ahab’s void and forehead; and the name
Is blocked in yellow chalk.
Sailors, who pitch this portent at the sea
Where dreadnaughts shall confess
Its hell-bent deity,
When you are powerless
To sand-bag this Atlantic bulwark, faced
By the earth-shaker, green, unwearied, chaste
In his steel scales: ask for no Orphean lute
To pluck life back. The guns of the steeled fleet
Recoil and then repeat
The hoarse salute.

II

Whenever winds are moving and their breath
Heaves at the roped-in bulwarks of this pier,
The terns and sea-gulls tremble at your death
In these home waters. Sailor, can you hear
The Pequod’s sea wings, beating landward, fall
Headlong and break on our Atlantic wall
Off ’Sconset, where the yawing S-boats splash
The bellbuoy, with ballooning spinnakers,
As the entangled, screeching mainsheet clears
The blocks: off Madaket, where lubbers lash
The heavy surf and throw their long lead squids
For blue-fish? Sea-gulls blink their heavy lids
Seaward. The winds’ wings beat upon the stones,
Cousin, and scream for you and the claws rush
At the sea’s throat and wring it in the slush
Of this old Quaker graveyard where the bones
Cry out in the long night for the hurt beast
Bobbing by Ahab’s whaleboats in the East.

III

All you recovered from Poseidon died
With you, my cousin, and the harrowed brine
Is fruitless on the blue beard of the god,
Stretching beyond us to the castles in Spain,
Nantucket’s westward haven. To Cape Cod
Guns, cradled on the tide,
Blast the eelgrass about a waterclock
Of bilge and backwash, roil the salt and sand
Lashing earth’s scaffold, rock
Our warships in the hand
Of the great God, where time’s contrition blues
Whatever it was these Quaker sailors lost
In the mad scramble of their lives. They died
When time was open-eyed,
Wooden and childish; only bones abide
There, in the nowhere, where their boats were tossed
Sky-high, where mariners had fabled news
Of IS, the whited monster. What it cost
Them is their secret. In the sperm-whale’s slick
I see the Quakers drown and hear their cry:
“If God himself had not been on our side,
If God himself had not been on our side,
When the Atlantic rose against us, why,
Then it had swallowed us up quick.”

IV

This is the end of the whaleroad and the whale
Who spewed Nantucket bones on the thrashed swell
And stirred the troubled waters to whirlpools
To send the Pequod packing off to hell:
This is the end of them, three-quarters fools,
Snatching at straws to sail
Seaward and seaward on the turntail whale,
Spouting out blood and water as it rolls,
Sick as a dog to these Atlantic shoals:
Clamavimus, O depths. Let the sea-gulls wail

For water, for the deep where the high tide
Mutters to its hurt self, mutters and ebbs.
Waves wallow in their wash, go out and out,
Leave only the death-rattle of the crabs,
The beach increasing, its enormous snout
Sucking the ocean’s side.
This is the end of running on the waves;
We are poured out like water. Who will dance
The mast-lashed master of Leviathans
Up from this field of Quakers in their unstoned graves?

V

When the whale’s viscera go and the roll
Of its corruption overruns this world
Beyond tree-swept Nantucket and Woods Hole
And Martha’s Vineyard, Sailor, will your sword
Whistle and fall and sink into the fat?
In the great ash-pit of Jehoshaphat
The bones cry for the blood of the white whale,
The fat flukes arch and whack about its ears,
The death-lance churns into the sanctuary, tears
The gun-blue swingle, heaving like a flail,
And hacks the coiling life out: it works and drags
And rips the sperm-whale’s midriff into rags,
Gobbets of blubber spill to wind and weather,
Sailor, and gulls go round the stoven timbers
Where the morning stars sing out together
And thunder shakes the white surf and dismembers
The red flag hammered in the mast-head. Hide,
Our steel, Jonas Messias, in Thy side.

VI

OUR LADY OF WALSINGHAM

There once the penitents took off their shoes
And then walked barefoot the remaining mile;
And the small trees, a stream and hedgerows file
Slowly along the munching English lane,
Like cows to the old shrine, until you lose
Track of your dragging pain.
The stream flows down under the druid tree,
Shiloah’s whirlpools gurgle and make glad
The castle of God. Sailor, you were glad
And whistled Sion by that stream. But see:

Our Lady, too small for her canopy,
Sits near the altar. There’s no comeliness
At all or charm in that expressionless
Face with its heavy eyelids. As before,
This face, for centuries a memory,
Non est species, neque decor,
Expressionless, expresses God: it goes
Past castled Sion. She knows what God knows,
Not Calvary’s Cross nor crib at Bethlehem
Now, and the world shall come to Walsingham.

VII

The empty winds are creaking and the oak
Splatters and splatters on the cenotaph,
The boughs are trembling and a gaff
Bobs on the untimely stroke
Of the greased wash exploding on a shoal-bell
In the old mouth of the Atlantic. It’s well;
Atlantic, you are fouled with the blue sailors,
Sea-monsters, upward angel, downward fish:
Unmarried and corroding, spare of flesh
Mart once of supercilious, wing’d clippers,
Atlantic, where your bell-trap guts its spoil
You could cut the brackish winds with a knife
Here in Nantucket, and cast up the time
When the Lord God formed man from the sea’s slime
And breathed into his face the breath of life,
And blue-lung’d combers lumbered to the kill.
The Lord survives the rainbow of His will.

This Poetry Friday is hosted by The Simple and The Ordinary

Friday, February 22, 2008

Poetry Friday: The Voice by Thomas Hardy

This week's Poetry Friday host is Big A little a

Thomas Hardy is better known for his novels, but he was an accomplished poet as well, and his prose was suffused with a poet's sensibilities. Here's a poem that I've always loved for the way the last stanza breaks its form as an indication of despair--both the narrator and the poem falter, can barely go on.

The Voice - by Thomas Hardy

Woman much missed, how you call to me, call to me,
Saying that now you are not as you were
When you had changed from the one who was all to me,
But as at first, when our day was fair.

Can it be you that I hear? Let me view you, then,
Standing as when I drew near to the town
Where you would wait for me: yes, as I knew you then,
Even to the original air-blue gown!

Or is it only the breeze in its listlessness
Travelling across the wet mead to me here,
You being ever dissolved to wan wistlessness,
Heard no more again far or near?

Thus I; faltering forward,
Leaves around me falling,
Wind oozing thin through the thorn from norward,
And the woman calling.

Friday, February 8, 2008

Poetry Friday: Auden's SEPTEMBER 1, 1939

(Jill has kindly asked me to guest-blog for her--I'm honored and hope you enjoy today's Poetry Friday selection-- Wes).

On September 1, 1939, Hitler invaded Poland and kicked off WWII. The following poem is Auden's response. It has received a lot of attention because of its eerie resonance with September 11: the juxtaposition of New York City, September, tall buildings, death, and war. It has also been criticized for sentimentality and "moral equivalence."

I'm touched especially (although many of course will be offended) by the idea that there is a premonition of violence and authoritarianism in the ambition and bustle of the city: "the lie of Authority\Whose buildings grope the sky". But then there are, despite the darkness of the poem, quasi-hopeful juxtapositions: "Ironic points of light"; "despair" and "affirmation"; "Eros" and "dust."

SEPTEMBER 1, 1939
by W.H. Auden

I sit in one of the dives
On Fifty-second Street
Uncertain and afraid
As the clever hopes expire
Of a low dishonest decade:
Waves of anger and fear
Circulate over the bright
And darkened lands of the earth,
Obsessing our private lives;
The unmentionable odour of death
Offends the September night.

Accurate scholarship can
Unearth the whole offence
From Luther until now
That has driven a culture mad,
Find what occurred at Linz,
What huge imago made
A psychopathic god:
I and the public know
What all schoolchildren learn,
Those to whom evil is done
Do evil in return.

Exiled Thucydides knew
All that a speech can say
About Democracy,
And what dictators do,
The elderly rubbish they talk
To an apathetic grave;
Analysed all in his book,
The enlightenment driven away,
The habit-forming pain,
Mismanagement and grief:
We must suffer them all again.

Into this neutral air
Where blind skyscrapers use
Their full height to proclaim
The strength of Collective Man,
Each language pours its vain
Competitive excuse:
But who can live for long
In an euphoric dream;
Out of the mirror they stare,
Imperialism's face
And the international wrong.

Faces along the bar
Cling to their average day:
The lights must never go out,
The music must always play,
All the conventions conspire
To make this fort assume
The furniture of home;
Lest we should see where we are,
Lost in a haunted wood,
Children afraid of the night
Who have never been happy or good.

The windiest militant trash
Important Persons shout
Is not so crude as our wish:
What mad Nijinsky wrote
About Diaghilev
Is true of the normal heart;
For the error bred in the bone
Of each woman and each man
Craves what it cannot have,
Not universal love
But to be loved alone.

From the conservative dark
Into the ethical life
The dense commuters come,
Repeating their morning vow;
'I will be true to the wife,
I'll concentrate more on my work,'
And helpless governors wake
To resume their compulsory game:
Who can release them now,
Who can reach the dead,
Who can speak for the dumb?

All I have is a voice
To undo the folded lie,
The romantic lie in the brain
Of the sensual man-in-the-street
And the lie of Authority
Whose buildings grope the sky:
There is no such thing as the State
And no one exists alone;
Hunger allows no choice
To the citizen or the police;
We must love one another or die.

Defenseless under the night
Our world in stupor lies;
Yet, dotted everywhere,
Ironic points of light
Flash out wherever the Just
Exchange their messages:
May I, composed like them
Of Eros and of dust,
Beleaguered by the same
Negation and despair,
Show an affirming flame.

Check out the rest of the poetry friday roundup at AmoXcalli

Friday, February 1, 2008

Poetry Friday: Another Dose of Yeats

Okay, so I'm on a Yeats kick this month. Something about his poetry just inspires me, makes me reminisce, and makes me just....sigh.

Here's another favorite

The Indian to His Love

The island dreams under the dawn
And great boughs drop tranquillity;
The peahens dance on a smooth lawn,
A parrot sways upon a tree,
Raging at his own image in the enamelled sea.
Here we will moor our lonely ship
And wander ever with woven hands,
Murmuring softly lip to lip,
Along the grass, along the sands,
Murmuring how far away are the unquiet lands:
How we alone of mortals are
Hid under quiet boughs apart,
While our love grows an Indian star,
A meteor of the burning heart,
One with the tide that gleams, the wings that gleam
and dart,
The heavy boughs, the burnished dove
That moans and sighs a hundred days:
How when we die our shades will rove,
When eve has hushed the feathered ways,
With vapoury footsole by the water's drowsy blaze.

Source

I was all prepared to write a reaction, a response, an analysis, but you know, sometimes you just want to savor the words...that's what good poetry is all about.

Check out the rest of the Poetry Friday roundup at Karen Edmisten's blog.

Friday, January 25, 2008

Poetry Friday


Ah...nothing like a little unrequited love to brighten up your day. We studied William Butler Yeats in my senior seminar in college, and the romantic in me LOVED to read about his infatuation with Maud Gonne who inspired so many beautiful poems. How I longed to me someone's muse, and I couldn't understand how she could have possibly resisted such beautiful words. Now that I think about it, maybe he was kind of creepy. Oh well...makes for some pretty darn good poetry. Here's one of my favorites that still gets to me:


When You Are Old

WHEN you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep;
How many loved your moments of glad grace,
And loved your beauty with love false or true,
But one man loved the pilgrim Soul in you,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face;
And bending down beside the glowing bars,
Murmur, a little sadly, how Love fled
And paced upon the mountains overhead
And hid his face amid a crowd of stars.

by: William Butler Yeats
Source: http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/when-you-are-old/

Favorite line: "But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you"
Sigh.....

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Friday, January 18, 2008

Poetry Friday: Phenomenal Woman

The poetry I love most is the poetry that has had some sort of impact on my life, poetry that MEANS something to me. There are a few poems that have really made a lasting impact on me, and I’d mostly like to feature those in Poetry Friday.

When I was in high school, I got the amazing opportunity to see Maya Angelou speak at a college campus near my hometown. We had just finishing reading I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings, and I was ecstatic when my English teacher told us we were going to see Angelou speak. To be honest, I don’t even remember what she spoke about, but she recited a few of her poems, and when she began to recite “Phenomenal Woman,” a hush fell over the crowd, and I was entranced. Perhaps it was the confidence she exuded as she read the poem, her movements, her facial expressions that got to me. All I know is that many years later, this poem is one I keep coming back to—one that has really impacted my life.

Here’s an excerpt:

Pretty women wonder where my secret lies.
I'm not cute or built to suit a fashion model's size
But when I start to tell them,
They think I'm telling lies.
I say,
It's in the reach of my arms
The span of my hips,
The stride of my step,
The curl of my lips.
I'm a woman
Phenomenally.
Phenomenal woman,
That's me.


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Friday, January 11, 2008

Poetry Friday--Don't be a Grouch


Have you ever had one of those days where you're grumpy for no apparent reason? Well, I've been having one of those weeks, and today I'm just one grumpy bird. And when I'm grumpy, I turn to my favorite grouch friend, Oscar, who has a knack for making me smile with his grouchiness.

Today, I'm presenting song as poetry with Oscar's classic "Knock Three Times."

If you want to see me, I'll tell you what to do,
Knock three times on my trashcan lid, and then I'll know it's you.
Knock three times (knock, knock, knock sound)
Knock three times (knock, knock, knock sound)
Knock three times (knock, knock, knock sound while he sings:)
And here's what I'll do:
I'll yell, "GO AWAY!"
'Cause I don't wanna see you.

Read the rest HERE.

Thanks to The Book Mine Set for hosting Poetry Friday this week!


Friday, January 4, 2008

Poetry Friday...Mountain Folks


This is my first Poetry Friday....yay! Thanks to Mary Lee and Franki at A Year of Reading for hosting this week's roundup.

So, last week I was in my hometown of Tazewell, VA, a small town nestled in the Appalachian Mountains. Even though I'm a "big city girl" now in DC, I miss the beauty and the quiet life of the region where I'm from. I'm an avid reader of Appalachian literature, and one of my favorite authors, Jo Carson, has a well loved book of poetry, called, Stories I Ain't Told Nobody Yet. Whenever I miss my home or family, I open this book up and read a piece or two from this collection of "oral histories." Some make me laugh, some make me cry, and some just fill me with warmth and nostalgia.

One of my favorites from the collection is about negative stereotypes of mountain folks, and it's the one I'd like to share today in honor of my fellow mountain peeps:

Mountain people
can’t read,
can’t write,
don’t wear shoes,
don’t have teeth,
don’t use soap, and don’t talk plain.
They beat their kids,
beat their friends,
beat their neighbors,
and beat their dogs.
They live on cow peas,
fatback, and twenty acres
straight up and down.
They don’t have money.
They do have fleas,
overalls,
tobacco patches,
shacks,
shotguns,
foodstamps,
liquor stills,
and at least six junk cars in the front yard,
Right?
Well, let me tell you:
I am from here,
I’m not like that
and I am damned tired of being told I am.
~ Jo Carson



When I was teaching English to high school juniors, I used this poem as an introduction to a lesson about stereotypes, and it led to some amazing discussions. Graycie over at "Today's Homework," has a great post about using this poem in her remedial English class and having students model it to write a poem called "Teenagers Can."


Also be sure to check out the rest of the Poetry Friday submissions at A Year of Reading!